Is this a good imagery poem? I feel like its not my best. i need constructive criticism.?

I'm from the area...spent many years summering in the Hamptons and Montauk. It's very realistic. There really is a starkness to the region which is what creates the calming effect. The only criticism I have is that you have not referenced the sixth sense of feeling as much as you could have. I've felt and heard those cold waves that bash the shore. I've seen the gangly pines, everywhere. Smelled the briny air (and the smell of seafood in the air as well). As a suggestion you could evoke a little more of the feelings of peacefulness and isolation but I would not tell you what to write.